Can you recast the following sentences to obtain effective parallelism?
1. The article you wrote was concise, thought-provoking and appeals to hundreds of readers.
2. He showed much energy at first but which soon vanished.
3. People constantly long to return to the land and fleeing back to simplier way of life.
4. Nenita likes to read, playing the piano, and going on long walks.
5. It is her fondest dream to study medicine or be a lawyer.
6. When man learned to use fire, he assured himself of protection against predators and having more and better food.
7. They learned better ways of making fire, to heat dwelling places and to handle smoke.
8. The story is a dramatic narrative and which concerns the lives sugar workers.
9. Ana Marie is a lovely girl and whom everyone likes.
10. The orphan had no shoes and dressed in thin ragged clothes when I saw her.
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1. The article you wrote was concise, thought-provoking, and appealing to hundreds of readers.
3. People constantly long to return to the land, fleeing back to a simpler way of life.
4. Nenita likes reading, playing the piano, and going on long walks.
5. It is her fondest dream to be a doctor or a lawyer.
7. They learned better ways of making fires, heating dwelling places, and handling smoke.
8. The story is a dramatic narrative concerning the lives of sugar workers.
9. Ana Marie is a lovely girl whom everyone likes.
10. The orphan had no shoes and only thin ragged clothes when I saw her.
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